Improvements
As I am given formal feedback on my blogs, I thought I’d see if I addressed these in this weeks edition.
Here are a few points I have been given in criticism of my previous blogs:
Poor grammar, No Links to Images, Improved structure of blog, No clear ending to blog.
I obviously tried to address these, with proof reading of my blog to check for grammactical errors. I linked my images and used licence free images. I also used sub-titles and tried to clear up the structure of my blog also. With a less ‘open-ended’ ending to my blog.
Thoughts on my blog
My blog – on discrimination, has made me wonder whether the fact I am a white male, has helped or hindered me in applications and in professional circles? It also has made me think: Do I really want people to know my thoughts, opinions jobs ect.? Will this affect me in the future when applying to jobs?
Also, it has made me question my unconcious… When put in a situation of hiring, I cannot say I wouldn’t use the unconcious bias as described in the blog.
Thoughts on other blogs
https://holliekinch.wordpress.com/2015/11/16/online-privacy-is-still-important/
I thought she raised good points and importantly – different points. So it was good to see different ethical issues in business raised.
I liked the link between last weeks blog and to see progression with the topic of privacy and how it related to the workplace.